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O n the
M ega side of life there is
G od who
I s an old fart.
L ynard skynarrad are
O sscialltatin between
V ery good and
E xtremely crap.
Y ou have to be
O blivious to
U nknown objects.
F or if
A ll else fails
Y ou shall be trapped in
E ternity.
F orever tormented
A nd suffering
Y our nedless
E ethnics


FAYE-FAYE's REPLY

I think that
Love is the
Only way to
Verse my words.
Everyday
You leave comments.
OMG they rock as well
U are so awesome
Just sorry that my poem
Aint very good
Cnt help it. Yours was
Koooooool!
I *heart* jackie
Eermm... I got nothing

hello my friend,
oh it's been so long
well not really

are you good?
really good?
excellent?

you rock so bad, my friend
oh my I do not lie
umm.. well... Hi!


My Reply


I can do amazing things

A nd i know that its dull
M any know nothing to supress

F iner things that they hate.
I n side hem they wither with
N ewly found hate that flowers
E xuberently like a fire work.

W well my friend
H ave you been good?
A very bad girl?
T hat would be a shame.

A lso i can think twice
B efore i act.
O r else imay not be here.
U nder stress we show colours
T hat reveal our true nature.

Y et when we rage upon them
O ur hearts stop us before we sluaghter.
U gly though it is we stop the fighting.
?

FAYE-FAYE's REPLY

I glanced upon a mountain side

H ill, thats what youd call it
A beautiful soul sitting
P anicing for some reason
P reassure came into my eyes
E ven though I was far
N ever did I realise

T hat I was becoming a scar
O n top of sadness itself

B ut i couldnt help it!
E' looked so sad

G od musnt of wanted him
O h my listen to what I am saying
O h my ive become insane
D err... this doesnt make sence

My Reply

T hen you know
H ow good it is to be
A wesome and
T hat you ARE.

I hope you are doing good
S o dont be silly *hug*

G o and get something to eat
O r you will surely go hungry
O n another note
D ont get detentions hehehehe

L earn
O n very chance you get
V erify your teachings.
E nter your self for
A nd realise that all is
G ood and well.
E xcersise your poetry

FAYE-FAYE's REPLY

You are hilarious
Omg how ou are
U are the coolest person ever

D ont ever think different
O h emmm gee
N never think different
T otally awesom you are!

K k, I know this sucks but
N o that you really rock
O ff the subject by saying
W oolooomooolooosooolooohooolooo

H ah, Im a retard
O uch theres so many o's
W tf. WHYYYY

M eh
U mm
C ough
H ah

Y eah you can tell
O again
U can telll im tired

R elax
O k
C ool it owt
K ool dude

My Reply

R oliing
O n the
F loor
L aughing
M y
F ecking
A ss
O ff

heheheheheh

wow cool you must really love poetry to keep writing in acrostics rofl

Y ou never know
O n the cercumstances as these are
U nder the light of darkness

A nd whats the point?
R ealy why do it?
E ver and always?

L eave all of it behind
O ver your sholder you glance
V erify you words are true
E ternity rests upon you
L ive and let die
Y Your words make me cry

F orever more
A dromeda closens
Y our life changed
E ternal life opens
F eel the torment and pain
A ll of which you understand
Y eilding words of pain and sorrow
E xperimenting with the devils tounge

L eave it all
O over again.
V erse your hatred
E xcruciating pain

Y eild the power
O pen the path
U nder the will of your wrath
©2008-2010 ~LycanthropicEmo
:iconlycanthropicemo:

Author's Comments

this was a lovage acrostic done by myself and Faye-Faye :iconfairycatcher-jessica:

ENJOY AND COMMENT :w00t:

EDIT: I have been updating this peice of work each time me and Faye-Faye reply to the last acrostic, I hope you are enjoying this cus it hurts your brain having to think of what goes with the letters. But once agin ENJOY AND COMMENT :hug:

and a big thanks to Faye-Faye:heart: for doing this with me :hug:

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--
Are you here?
Are you listening?
Playing with my mind.
Stop your whistling!

Smiles all round?
Fake your life?
Throw it away,
In grief and strife.

Take me with you.
And don’t forget.
I never loved you.
And we never met.

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